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Self Constraint
In murky night and dusky morning
In the fathoms of oceans he hides all day
Envying the eagles soaring
Incognito all the way
One little slip could mean demise
He constraints himself with iron
When they unearth his lies
Shadows will ring the siren
Arrows are blast through the air
Battle drums echo death is near
Eagle's claws will bear
His way forward is clear:
"Tis time to call out the shield,
We are impenetrable to anything they yield!"
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OMG, i just read it again... its sooo bad (sigh)
Since my sonnet isn't all that Im going to post some pictures to entertain the poor peeps that were nice enough to visit.
:D
Bored
My hawt leg.
Ah look we are happy again!
GREEN GOBLIN(S)
I uploaded this by mistake :S
Hadrien Nader and Baha play many songs I have never heard before at graffiti. Don't forget us little people when you become famous.
3 comments:
I like your sonnet, JD! Very poetic! The second quatrain is particularly good.
I genuinely love it!!bravo!
I think it's about someone who wants to unburden himself from a secret but can't because he thinks the reaction would catastrophic. Your diction is very good...an overall success :D
Nice hard too understand but seemed very deep.
So good job
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